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[GunChest Episode 03_01]

Good.

This is going along well. My only criticism, though, is that you've cut the episodes in odd places. I would have preferred if you ended it off with some sharp dialogue, instead of half-way into a fight.

[The Assumption Song]

LULZ.

I was already laughing by the time you replaced "PLAY" with "FUCK".
It's just that good.

[GunChest Episode 02_02]

Decent

Great action and animation, but the story, so far, seems to be a tad cliched. The voice actor for Gunchest is decent, but most of the other characters could use some work in that part, and some parts of the dialogue are a bit awkward. Still, a slick animation.

[GunChest Episode 01_02]

great

Awesome animation, great choreography, decent voice work, but the story itself left me wanting a little bit more. Who were the scientists that made Isis-Ankh? What are the humans doing at this time? You could have explored the idea of how smart robots have drawbacks, but you've made the robots just proxies for human characters, really; the situation is human, the characters look just about human, and the whole robot thing seems to be just visuals instead of a strong theme.

Still, I can't expect you to be a master writer right off the bat, and I'll have to take the excellent animating for what it is. 9/10, 5/5.

[don't watch this]

Eh...

I know the whole point was that it was supposed to look rushed, but it just somehow felt a little incomplete. Maybe you could add a soundtrack or some other touches. Otherwise, it's hilarious.

[There She Is!! step4]

Amazing

This series is one of the few I've seen that can actually get across feelings.

[Easy Way Out]

Awesome

Great story, great animation, great art direction, great music, and everything comes together nicely. 10/10, 5/5.

[Time For Heroes!]

Great

The unfinished clips together work pretty well as a psychotic music video, actually. Funny at parts and awesome at others. Still, there's that unfinished feel to it; Maybe you can make another one with better rhythm sync and etc.?

[Xionic Madness 1.5]

A few unneccesary things

Story wasn't too bad in itself, but a bit cliched. The dialogue needs the most work; It has way too many "trying-to-be-smart" moments, with all the lines about tech, DNA, etc etc. Also, the dialogue tends to interrupt the action a little too frequently.

The action itself, though, is superb, and almost makes up for those minor shortcomings.

Xionico responds:

´Well in first I tried to make a not so complex plot for a Madness flash, and yeah I went a bit overboard on the trying to be smart thingy XD

Glad the action almost made it up

[Mr Soap]

Meh

The art was decent, but there was barely anything else. Not too shabby considering you did this in short time, though. 6/10, 3/5.