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[**Moments of Inspiration**]

Fits together

The title fits the mood and the story fantastically well. Overall, a pretty epic tune; I would say it's on par with most of the ending-type songs they use in fantasy movies or games.

KTRECORDS responds:

Cool man, glad you liked it. It is a very good choice for an ending theme imo as well. Thx for the review!

-Jason
KTRECORDS

[Crystal Sky]

Decent.

The melody was sort of chaotic and didn't match the title, but was in itself fine. Could use more background still. It also doesn't loop that well. Fair for a first try, I would look forward to you improving.

7/10, 4/5.

twiddely-man responds:

THANK YOU! yeah, i now realize this is no loop.

background... gotta brush up on my music theory...

[(WF1)/Tell Astral Feelings]

Great

Beautiful melody, but there are a few instruments that don't exactly fit the mood (Specifically, stuff like the agogo), and a few minor rhythm errors. Still, a very decent song.

5/5, 9/10

wyldfyre1 responds:

The rythem errors are actually apart of the beauty of the song i've come to understand haha. Towards the end of the making of this i couldn't make myself fix it. Just kinda gave it more of a realism.

[.:-{Vultus Tergum}-:.]

Not bad

Has a nice air-ish feel to it. Great for relaxing or background music. Still, it could have used just a tad more harmony, but excellent nonetheless.

9/10, 5/5.

Tamadrum responds:

Thanks man... actually at some points, I had like a 8 or 9 part harmony. It's not even really playable on a piano lol. But I made sure to bring out the melody and trickling right-hand patterns to reinforce them... Thanks for the review buddy.

[=Dreamscape=]

Nice

Not bad. The song's kind of "drowned", though, with the tones being too mellow. It could also use something in the background; this is just a melody. Overall, though, I'll gibe you 8/10 and 4/5.

twiddely-man responds:

i know who you are! thanks for reviewing. i know, youre right. its not completely my fault the tones are drowned... i think ill rerecord it with something crisper sounding like a music box.

see, i have to play it, and i completely lack the skill to play a melody and a beat or bassline as well. im completely self taught at piano...

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its not my intent to keep making excuses though... i'll learn... stuff...